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Ok, guys... finally I got the inspiration for start to write about my Pokémon concept. However, I'm going to need some help. As I'm not a native English speaker, I tend to make grammatical mistakes, specially when I'm tired . For that reason I'm requesting help from someone that could aid me with the English grammar. You know, a translator, editor or grammar nazi would be fine.
Also, I would like to receive some feedback and suggestion. I have in mind around of 6 tentative chapters, however I still have some plot-holes that I need to correct, and the feeback always help me to order my ideas (I work quite fine brainstorming)
I'm thinking release a pilot chapter to see the reaction of the people. Here is a brief intro about the chapter:
The Struggle
Living in the city isn't easy, specially when you're a creature left to its fate. Everyday the stray Pokemon struggles for survive.
Slowly these creatures has started to acquire some behavior similar to the humans, probably due living with us side to side. This is reflected that some group of Pokemon has started to form small settlements, showing social behavior and opting for the collaboration as a way for subsist. Instead, other Pokemon has begun to acquire some some of our vices, opting for the pillage and robbery for survive. For this reason isn't weird that both group often clashes.
The story talks about one of these clashes. A small group of Pokemon is attacked by a gang led by a ruthless fighting Pokemon. However a dauntless hero will come to the aid.
- - -
I have this chapter almost finished inside in my head... just a few minors details to fix and it will be done. However in the case of the other chapters there are various aspects that I need to correct. Among them are:
- Fix some details about the dynamic between Mew & Celebi (I want to make it convincing, not a crappy thing worth from a mushy fanfic). Also I need a good and convincing reason to make Celebi stay in the city (something kinda difficult, considering her time-warping skills)
- Create more side stories
- Make the final design for the Industrial Garden, the hub location of the story. The good about it is I'm not going to need it until the 5th or 6th episode, and already I have 3 concept arts done.
- Start to do the other Pokemon Settlements, the one below the port and the underground one.
- Choose a final design for Kirlia
- Balance the generations. Currently I have an imbalance toward the older generations to the detriment of of the newer ones. So, in that aspect I would like hear which Pokemons would you like to see.
Well, that's all I had to say. Any suggestion or comment is welcome ^^
Also, I would like to receive some feedback and suggestion. I have in mind around of 6 tentative chapters, however I still have some plot-holes that I need to correct, and the feeback always help me to order my ideas (I work quite fine brainstorming)
I'm thinking release a pilot chapter to see the reaction of the people. Here is a brief intro about the chapter:
The Struggle
Living in the city isn't easy, specially when you're a creature left to its fate. Everyday the stray Pokemon struggles for survive.
Slowly these creatures has started to acquire some behavior similar to the humans, probably due living with us side to side. This is reflected that some group of Pokemon has started to form small settlements, showing social behavior and opting for the collaboration as a way for subsist. Instead, other Pokemon has begun to acquire some some of our vices, opting for the pillage and robbery for survive. For this reason isn't weird that both group often clashes.
The story talks about one of these clashes. A small group of Pokemon is attacked by a gang led by a ruthless fighting Pokemon. However a dauntless hero will come to the aid.
- - -
I have this chapter almost finished inside in my head... just a few minors details to fix and it will be done. However in the case of the other chapters there are various aspects that I need to correct. Among them are:
- Fix some details about the dynamic between Mew & Celebi (I want to make it convincing, not a crappy thing worth from a mushy fanfic). Also I need a good and convincing reason to make Celebi stay in the city (something kinda difficult, considering her time-warping skills)
- Create more side stories
- Make the final design for the Industrial Garden, the hub location of the story. The good about it is I'm not going to need it until the 5th or 6th episode, and already I have 3 concept arts done.
- Start to do the other Pokemon Settlements, the one below the port and the underground one.
- Choose a final design for Kirlia
- Balance the generations. Currently I have an imbalance toward the older generations to the detriment of of the newer ones. So, in that aspect I would like hear which Pokemons would you like to see.
Well, that's all I had to say. Any suggestion or comment is welcome ^^
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Despite everything, I'm still alive
Hello people. I know it been a lot of time since the last time since I logged into my account, and much more time since my last journal.
I'm just writing to tell what it been about me all this time. Well, to say simple, these 5-6 years weren't easy for me. There were lot of health issues for my family and me, after I finished the University.
Fortunately everything is better now, but that put a major stop in various aspects of my life, including the studies and the art. Also that caused some working issues, because I had to drop my doctorate/PhD, so basically I've been jobless and the situation in my country has been quite bad in that aspec
Now I have a tumblr account :3
Finally I decided create a tumblr account:
http://adept-ex.tumblr.com
I think I'm going to use for post my doodles and wips, and as an online journal. I'm still learning how to use it, so if you have any good tutorials or themes/layouts I'm gonna be grateful.
Also, Now that I have my main account I'm considering to create a blog for the Street Tales. I dunno, I'm gonna see if there is interest.
Sketchs for everyone 8D
Blackmailed by ~Dani-V (https://www.deviantart.com/dani-v)
Rules:
10 sketch the first 10 people to comment on this journal with references. In return, I ask that you offer 10 free sketches in your own journal!
If you don't, you'll be taken off the list!
Only for watchers!
1.- :iconlindaofcc: (Kurama from YuYu Hakusho)
2.- :iconGnukko: (Rachel from BCB)
3.- :iconLoumun-Versen: (Pokemon OC, Fly)
4.- :iconFlamy-Star: (Sonic OC, Slor)
5.- :iconlolonaco: (Conny, the bunny boy & Sharkgal)
6.- :icondani-v: (Fer)
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Now lets begin the fun :la:
Kiriban 50,000
Oh wow! Almost I didn't notice that I'm close to the 50,000 pageviews O.o
I've never done a kiriban before, but who knows. It could be funny =D
The first person who gets a screenshot of my frontpage reaching 50,000 pageviews will receive a free request =)
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:star:EDIT: Come on guys! Just 200 pageviews :la:... Stay alert
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This sounds quite interesting!!